Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Response to manjot's question #3 post

I like how you started of the paragraph with information on different kinds of heros! But it would have been better if you provided a little bit of information on Peter, because for those who never read the book, they will have no idea what you may be talking about! Also, you should explain some of the "accidental heros", and you should also explain and provide examples to Peter from someone in the past or present that you would call a hero. Overall, good response, but you should answer more of the questions from #3 and expain more of the things that you stated! : )

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