Cerella's question

Good job in answering the whole question and not leaving anything out. However there are some parts that could use some improvment. Such as your paragraphs could start off a bit better. In this line ''but in the end, I cannot hide from it from my parents or friends, and in the end I gather up my courage and face the secrets in my heart and eventually talk about them with whom I trust, such as my parents or friends''you repeat your self, you say ''but in the end.........and in the end you say the some thing but in different words. Whole together it was a really good answer.