Tuesday, 18 October 2011

Big A

 I believe that it depends on whether you believe in god or not. A person who doesn't believe in god probably doesn't think that our lives are made before we are born but a person who believes in god probably does. It also depends on your parents and if they want you to live a life they want you to live. I think a man can not change his life. I believe our lives are written before we are even born, even if you think you are changing your life it was probably written to be like that in the first place.

You probably can predict what will happen to your life in the future. For example, you may want to become a doctor and in the future. Then you do become a doctor, but the route you take to enter that professional field you will never know, whether you will be elected by a university right away, after some time or not at all.

1 comment:

  1. Good start - An interesting and thoughtful response to elaborate upon. Are you suggesting that a person's life path being pre-determined depends upon whether they believe in god? This suggests man does not have free will or choices to make throughout their lives. You also suggests that parents have a strong influence upon your life's path. Again this suggests the individual has limited control over their own choices. Do you think this is so or have I misunderstood you? Try to add concrete examples to support and extend your general comments.

    I am confused about your second paragraph - several grammar errors and maybe word choice getting in the way of clarity.

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